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Saturday, 27 September 2014

Dairy Farm Diorama



We have been making dioramas on dairy farms and trying to put in as many inputs as we can into it. In here we have a few inputs.

  • Fences
  • Water for animals
  • Food shed
  • Animals , Pigs,sheep,cows
  • Milking machines
  • Tractor
  • Electricity
  • Shelter
  • Area for cows and animals to wonder in
I really enjoyed making this diorama with my group and figuring out how to make things with limited sources.

Wednesday, 17 September 2014

Speech Judging Criteria

Key = Green = things I have done well
Red=Things I could of worked on

SPEAKER :Leki
CLASS

TITLE:    Be Authentic

MARK
INTRODUCTION
• audience is hooked in with an interesting quotes or jokes or statistical information









          9/10
Presentation and Delivery
• Facial and body gestures must enhance not distract from the speech
• Use of eye-contact
• Relaxed stance
• Use of pause to allow the audience to assimilate the message
• Variety of pace
-I spoke with a Clear voice and paused throughout my Speech.
-Eye contact I was spending too much time looking at my cards.






           9 /15
Content of Speech
• The message of the speech is clear
• Is it relevant, meaningful clear and concise?
• Ideas are well elaborated and supported.
  • Use of specific vocabulary
  • Clear sequence and flow
  • -I grouped my ideas by putting  everything about being yourself in one paragraph and everything about why its bad to not be yourself in one.






             15/20
CONCLUSION
Argument is summed up
Has an overall impact Audience Reaction
-I could of captured the audiences attention by using interesting vocabulary





           5  / 5
TOTAL

REMARKS



            



Friday, 5 September 2014

Expressive Writing

Colors

Purple- is for the times your bored. The times things are rushing through your head, overflowing your brain making you bored. Aqua is for the ocean. The times your gliding through the water, cooling yourself off. Brown is for vintage its for antiques. Things. Things that are gathering dust in your basement.
Gold is for your times of glory.
Colors they express your feelings

I have tried my best to use the 7 elements

Wednesday, 3 September 2014