Narrative Writing

Once in the Pacific Ocean there was a boat with 4 kids in it. Leki,Lopeti,Simione and Jay, they were heading towards an island called the land of lost souls. They had been forced to go because they had stolen gold and they all had to go and get killed by demons as their punishment. They arrived on Friday the 13th this was the one day all demons would kill everyone so there was not one living human on the island. The boys hopped off into the island they felt a strong gust blow right in front of them it was a lost soul. “Welcome to the island of lost souls” said simione. “ Lets go find some shelter to rest for the night” said Jay. They headed off looking for a big tree they found one but there was a rope connected to one of the big branches on the tree. “ Someone died here” Said Lopeti. But they were exhausted and really wanted to sit down so they lied down and tried to fall asleep. “ Morning guys” said Leki, leki saw only simione was there the other two disappeared. A scary voice said “ It’s still Friday the 13th and look up”. The two boys slowly looked up it was Lopeti and Jay with their hands tied to a slim branch about to be dropped on to the rope.

Leki and Simione ran as fast as they could in the woods when wham Simione was sucked into a grave. Leki screamed he couldn’t believe his friends were gone. Leki panicked he ran to the water shouted “ Lopeti……. Jay……….SIMIONE”. He sat down and wondered why they had to go. He grabbed some sticks and lit a fire and tried to keep himself warm he was getting hungry he wanted to eat a hamburger,chips with a large coke “ Man I’m hungry” He said. Leki noticed his fire was growing bigger and bigger it spreaded all around the sand he moved back slowly screaming out “ HELP HELP” when all of a sudden the fire turned into fog and spreaded all over the water and from distance 3 body’s on long sticks approached it was Lopeti,Jay and simione’s lost souls. Leki said “ Oh Man why me …..WHY ME!!!” His heart was beating faster and faster as they approached a tear slowly fell down his face. They were at the shore he knew his life was over and there was  nothing he could do. but from the ocean he heard “ Hi you are on prank tv and you just got pranked”.