Expressive Writing

Here is my best piece of expressive writing. I know this is my best piece from this week because I tried to use  interesting and specific vocabulary. I tried really hard to use punctuation correctly and consistently. I also made sure It makes sense. Here It is:

SPACE

Space, a huge place full of mysteries. Is there anyone out there? What If there was a world just like ours. A place kind of like earth, maybe they won't have technology or they might be stuck in the stone ages. Maybe they might be more futuristic then our world. They might drive in hover cars, their subways might go underground, or portals take them to other places. There have been discoveries of other planets like earth where there could be a form of life. I don't like the feeling of being lonely we can't be the only people in the whole galaxy. I don't believe in aliens but I do believe there could be other people out there. Maybe in other places the will have planets and a sun, maybe not a sun It could be a giant moon and they only have night time not day. I have so many questions to ask but so many of my questions can't be answered yet. This topic really interests me, one day I will find out, Is there anyone out there?

Green= parts I have been using the 3 learns really well

Movenote/Holy Communion

I Have learnt a lot about the Sacrament of Holy Communion. Rachel and I did a Move note on what we learnt.

Ambury Farm

We went to ambury farm and I did a movenote on my experience.

Spanish/Movenote

Today sefesi and practiced talking to each other in spanish we did a movenote on it here it is

Wala is Life

Today we watched a drumming show the group was wala is life . I did a move note on it,  to practice using this app. I am enjoying using move note and I am starting getting better. Here it is.

MoveNote

Today we had Tae kwon do and I did a move note on It.

Here It is

I also did maths I was working on a fraction equation and I showed how to work it out.

Its on the same link

Expressive Writing

• In expressive writing I have been making sure I do three things.
• That my writing makes sense
• Use specific and interesting vocabulary

Use punctuation correctly and consistently


Here Is my favorite piece of expressive writing this week

1/08/14

Expressive Writing

Its a hard life trying to survive. I care too much about what people think of me. Threatening to hurt me, Making me feel small and unwanted. They drag me down,Its as if they tied a brick to me pulling me down as I desperately try to free myself from the feelings of exhaustion and pain until I just give up, let them have total control over me. As a fire lights up inside of me I feel the need for revenge, the need to cause them pain but I know I’m better than that. Suddenly the brick pulling me back shatters and crumbles. The miserable feelings leaves turning into a memory, the past.

The whole time all I had to do was ignore them, block them out.  Why should I care about what others think I'm me and I shouldn't be teased for that.

Bullying