Expressive Writing

• In expressive writing I have been making sure I do three things.
• That my writing makes sense
• Use specific and interesting vocabulary

Use punctuation correctly and consistently


Here Is my favorite piece of expressive writing this week

1/08/14

Expressive Writing

Its a hard life trying to survive. I care too much about what people think of me. Threatening to hurt me, Making me feel small and unwanted. They drag me down,Its as if they tied a brick to me pulling me down as I desperately try to free myself from the feelings of exhaustion and pain until I just give up, let them have total control over me. As a fire lights up inside of me I feel the need for revenge, the need to cause them pain but I know I’m better than that. Suddenly the brick pulling me back shatters and crumbles. The miserable feelings leaves turning into a memory, the past.

The whole time all I had to do was ignore them, block them out.  Why should I care about what others think I'm me and I shouldn't be teased for that.

Bullying