Here is my best piece of expressive writing. I know this is my best piece from this week because I tried to use interesting and specific vocabulary. I tried really hard to use punctuation correctly and consistently. I also made sure It makes sense. Here It is:
SPACE
Space, a huge place full of mysteries. Is there anyone out there? What If there was a world just like ours. A place kind of like earth, maybe they won't have technology or they might be stuck in the stone ages. Maybe they might be more futuristic then our world. They might drive in hover cars, their subways might go underground, or portals take them to other places. There have been discoveries of other planets like earth where there could be a form of life. I don't like the feeling of being lonely we can't be the only people in the whole galaxy. I don't believe in aliens but I do believe there could be other people out there. Maybe in other places the will have planets and a sun, maybe not a sun It could be a giant moon and they only have night time not day. I have so many questions to ask but so many of my questions can't be answered yet. This topic really interests me, one day I will find out, Is there anyone out there?
Green= parts I have been using the 3 learns really well
Leki
ReplyDeleteI really like how you high lighted all the things that you think you have achieve your writing goals. I really like how you wrote about what if there was another plant like earth.